Wow sentences…
Posted in Uncategorized on November 15, 2008 by year5On Friday, for our Big Write, we retold the story of ‘Our Benny’ after our visit to the theatre. (Thanks Mrs Brankin, for organising it by the way!)
I was really impressed by the standard of work produced by the children overall, but one or two sentences were really special and had the WOW factor!
Check these out…
I was astounded and for a day or two sad thoughts were drained from my mind. (Grace)
My body was warm but my heart was frozen inside. (Amy)
About a year after I worked there it came to a shuddering halt, the happiness drained from me for Eva’s dad accused me of something I did not do. (James)
Well done you three. A chance card is waiting for each of you!
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