Y5’s Big Writing Goal Scorers of the Week
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This week’s Big Write was a recount text. The boys and girls had to imagine they were a poor, homeless child in Victorian times. However, part of the way through their recount they were to meet Dr. Barnado and explain how he changed children’s lives for the better.
This week’s goalscorers are…Â
GOAL!!!!!
The golden, crisp sun grew as we got a bath in a nearby swamp which was covered in gunge. By Andrew
I heard a loud shout behind me, but I didn’t stop. I tightened my grip around the coins I’d just stolen, my heart pounding. I then chose the wrong moment to look back and stumbled over a hidden tree root. I closed my eyes, waiting for the cold, unfriendly feeling of handcuffs…Â Â By Bronte
I felt as cold as a frozen mammoth when I woke up, for it was only about half five. By Mark
It all started when I woke up on a damp, hard and uncomfortable deserted park bench  where I used to sleep. By Maisie
The golden sun finally shone upon me and my friend as I tenderly cry with happiness. By Stephen
Due to the condition of the weather I still had to go out and beg - it’s lousy! We never get anything anyway so it’s useless! By Rachel
Well done to all of you. We had 6 goals this week, which was only three more than Wolves scored against Cardiff! Third in the Championship at the moment by the way - could be playing against the Mighty Reds next season! Come on the Wanderers!
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